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Wednesday, September 12, 2012
Better Sentences
I like to hear music, usually I would plug my headphones and start to hear it. I like hearing music from many artist I don´t really have a preferred one. But some of the ones I enjoy the most are: Coldplay, Owl City, and Maroon 5. Some music I hear is Fireflies, Moves like Jagger Rolling in the Deep and many more. I think music is a great way that people can express how they feel and because of this we can understand how someone feels. I love music and I really hope that I keep hearing to it.
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Hey Lino;
ReplyDeleteYour writing is quite good.
There are a few simple punctuation mistakes, grammatical errors and word choice problems, but despite this, your writing is clear and concise.
You want to use prepositions but they don´t seem to work as well as you want.
I think we can agree on a 3, and it is a strong 3; if you know what I mean.
Keep working and reading. You could be writing more. Correct?
Jeremy